Your gong fu has a lot of good and bad points, but I'd like to draw particular attention to problems in your footwork.
你的功夫优点和缺点并存,但我希望你能特别要注意你的步法。
I never heard of anyone making a'skeleton', as we were taught at school.
我从未听说过任何一位作家像我们在学校学的那样,动笔前先列什么提纲。